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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem21 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You started the post beautifully. In fact, schools often remain almost the same, only the students change. Within the same classroom, countless memories and emotions are stored. Every year new students come and go, yet the classroom itself stays unchanged. Your opening lines made me reflect deeply on these thoughts.

The memories of the first day of school,new uniform, new bag, new shoes always feel timeless. These moments never really fade. The way your teacher helped build your confidence was truly important for your personal growth and for becoming more comfortable expressing yourself. It was also heart-warming to read that your fourth-grade teacher still remembers you; that shows how meaningful the bond between teachers and students can be.

School teachers play a vital role in teaching us moral values. Your teacher encouraged teamwork and helping one another, and also taught the importance of returning things that do not belong to us after use. The closing lines of your post were especially powerful. You clearly learned something meaningful from your school life, and that lesson is beautifully reflected throughout your writing.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.5
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9 Points
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