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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

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Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

It was really nice to hear that, as a student, your school days were simple, peaceful, and full of joy. That’s probably why you can still describe those memories so beautifully today. School is often where we first get introduced to creative learning, and as a Girl Guide, you clearly gained some meaningful experiences. Working on the solar system project sounds especially impressive, it must have been an exciting and valuable lesson. I’m curious to know who helped you learn and complete that work.

Your success clearly came from your hardworking nature during school life. The awards you received surely worked as strong motivation and encouragement for you. Although students often have a bit of childish thinking, there is always an innocence and purity in it. From reading your post, it’s clear that you were very focused on your studies. You truly enjoyed school, and that’s why the environment made you feel safe, free, and comfortable, turning school into a joyful daily routine rather than a burden.

Reading about your friends and teachers, it’s easy to understand how close they were to you. Both friends and teachers play important roles in shaping our school life and achievements. You didn’t mention many mistakes from your school days, which suggests that you lived a disciplined life even back then and that discipline is why you still carry and value those important school-life lessons today.

School life really proves that with hard work, it’s possible to reach life’s goals, because it’s the best preparation phase for building ourselves. You’ve written a truly wonderful and inspiring post.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.6
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.4 Points
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Peace be upon you @sohanurrahman sir !
Sir I have used all the pictures originally in my post and I edited all the pictures in my post with your permission first and then I have prepared my post. Why did you cut my numbers? I have shared almost all the pictures of my school life with the original up and I have mentioned in the details and I have remembered every moment again. So I really don't understand that despite preparing such a good and wonderful post of mine, you have cut my numbers. If you have done it, you will tell me why? 😭 Believe me, it took me a long time to make this post and I prepared this post with great effort but

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I am sorry that you received fewer marks. I truly understand and appreciate the time, effort, and emotions you put into your post. Your school life memories were presented beautifully.

However, while giving marks, I have to follow some specific evaluation criteria, and for that reason, a few marks were deducted. This was not done to undermine your hard work or the quality of your writing, but rather as a constructive evaluation to help you improve further.

I sincerely hope you will do even better in your future posts. Best wishes to you.

Yes, I understand that you have to give a review keeping in mind everything, but the numbers you have cut have broken my heart so much that I am very sorry. But if you can't give 10 by 10 numbers you could give 9.9, but as you want. I will see what to do next time. I will surely think a thousand times to post.

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