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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem18 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Your description of the excitement and joy of going to school on your very first day felt incredible, While reading it, I became quite emotional because it reminded me of my own school days. The contrast you mentioned, waking up late on regular days but getting up early on school days, beautifully shows how excited and eager you were to attend school.

As a student, your regular involvement in studies, sports, and various competitions clearly reflects that you were attentive not only to academics but also to extracurricular activities. Your respect and gratitude toward your teachers truly stood out to me. You have presented very nicely how a teacher’s love, guidance, and discipline can play a crucial role in shaping a student’s life.

Learning from mistakes is one of the most important lessons in life. The way you acknowledged your own mistakes, worked to correct them, and drew valuable life lessons from those experiences shows a very mature and positive mindset. Not everyone can honestly evaluate their own mistakes, and this quality makes your reflection even more meaningful.

In my opinion, you have clearly shown how your school experiences influenced your present life, your discipline, sense of responsibility, and patience are evident throughout the post. However, the post could have been even better if a few more school-life photos were added. Overall, it’s a wonderful effort. Best wishes to you.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing2
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.8
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1.8
Total9.1 Points