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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem21 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Sister, reading your post really brought your school days vividly to life for me. You’ve captured so beautifully how school memories can be so deep and lasting. The mix of joy, fear, emotions, and those sweet, unforgettable moments shines clearly in your writing.

Feeling scared on your first day of high school is completely natural, and adjusting to a new environment is always challenging. But it was clear how the teacher’s warm smile and caring attitude could make a student’s life easier. You’ve shown perfectly how a teacher’s positive influence can leave a lasting impact on a student’s mind.

Your experiences of exam fears, gradually making friends, and sharing tiffin all felt very heartfelt. I also loved how you highlighted your friend Riya’s role in your life. Having a friend like her is so important, her dedication to studying is truly inspiring and shows how the right friend can guide us on the right path.

The lesson about learning from mistakes is also very powerful. Your reflection on being careless in exams and taking your teacher’s advice seriously demonstrates self-awareness and a mindset to improve. Finally, the way your school dreams, fears, hard work, and perseverance have shaped who you are today is beautifully expressed. I really enjoyed reading your post.adding some pictures of your school building would make your post even more engaging.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.7
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.8
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.3 Points