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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem18 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Brother, reading your post truly brought back memories of my own childhood. Your elder brother clearly seems like a responsible person, and the moment of going to school for the first time holding his hand felt very emotional to me. Crying on the first day is completely realistic, almost everyone goes through such an experience at the beginning of school life because of the unfamiliar environment.

As a student, the way you described your fear, discipline, and gradual adjustment is really admirable. I also know how joyful it feels to receive recognition from teachers for doing well in studies. The way you and your friends supported each other in academics shows how important true friendship is during school life.

Your teacher’s strict discipline may have felt painful at that time, but the mature way you realized later how it played a vital role in shaping your character really touched me. The incident of making mistakes in exams and learning from them reflects your honesty and desire for self-improvement.

it is very clear how school education, discipline, and dreams helped shape the person you are today. You shared a wonderful post. Best wishes to you.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.3 Points