RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days
Your writing has very sincerely portrayed the memories, struggles and learning experiences of school life. At the beginning, you said that many call school a “scam” and reached the real life understanding from there. Reading these parts, the excitement of the first day, reaching school early in the morning, trying to sit in the front seat, I felt like I was seeing the events in reality.
However, the incident of reserving a seat and the terrible experience that happened from there was really a bit bad. Here, your emotions, fears and subsequent learning are clearly revealed. However, I like that the learning that you are taking from the experience is important.
As a middle-class student, your struggle, financial limitations and mental fear are presented very realistically. The fact that you have gathered courage and overcome fears is inspiring to me. The role of your friend Destiny Chinoso was extraordinary. The importance of a good friend and mentor is beautifully highlighted here.
In the last part, your dreams and self-reliance are clearly and positively expressed. In fact, the lessons of school life teach us a lot.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Original storytelling from childhood | 2 |
| Original Photography | Personal photos or recreated moments, photo caption | 1.5 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Neat format, readable, visually appealing | 1.8 |
| Memory Description | Emotions, details, and clarity of childhood | 2 |
| Life Lesson / Value | Reflection on what the memory taught you | 2 |
| Total | 9.3 Points |