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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem3 days ago

Your writing has very sincerely portrayed the memories, struggles and learning experiences of school life. At the beginning, you said that many call school a “scam” and reached the real life understanding from there. Reading these parts, the excitement of the first day, reaching school early in the morning, trying to sit in the front seat, I felt like I was seeing the events in reality.

However, the incident of reserving a seat and the terrible experience that happened from there was really a bit bad. Here, your emotions, fears and subsequent learning are clearly revealed. However, I like that the learning that you are taking from the experience is important.

As a middle-class student, your struggle, financial limitations and mental fear are presented very realistically. The fact that you have gathered courage and overcome fears is inspiring to me. The role of your friend Destiny Chinoso was extraordinary. The importance of a good friend and mentor is beautifully highlighted here.

In the last part, your dreams and self-reliance are clearly and positively expressed. In fact, the lessons of school life teach us a lot.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.3 Points