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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem17 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Your writing created a deep emotion in me from the beginning. You wanted to highlight the connection between school life and the next chapter of life. It came out very beautifully.

In the first part, the emotional tension of school life, the joy of friendship and the pressure of studying, have been described very realistically. Especially the fear before the exam and the feeling of seeing friends that that fear disappears, many readers will be able to relate to their own lives.

The feeling of the last exam day, the light relief and the moment of moving forward towards the future have all been described very beautifully. The idea of ​​standing next to the window and thinking of yourself as a survivor is truly amazing.

You have beautifully highlighted the importance of friendship. You have been able to clearly explain the power of staying together even in the midst of extra classes, heat, and fatigue. I liked the message that friends here are not only classmates, but also play a role as emotional support.

How important a role school life has played in the writer's confidence, patience and goal formation. Showing memories as the foundation of the future, not just the past, shows your mental strength.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.8
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total8.6 Points