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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem22 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

The memory of Traditional Custom Day was one of your school memories. Through it, you have highlighted the experience of learning about your roots, culture and mother's tribe by going to school.

Your feelings of loneliness as a student and the pain caused by the behavior of the senior prefect will touch the hearts of the readers. The scene of coming to school by yourself without your parents is similar to many of our childhoods.

You have sincerely expressed the importance of a friend who is there for you in difficult times, which is an expression of your love for your friends to us.

Although the part about the education and regret gained through the incident of jumping the school fence is a bit short, it was an important life lesson. The mentality of learning from mistakes shows your mature thinking.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.5
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1.5
Total8.3 Points