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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem18 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Reading your writing, I felt that you have narrated the story of your school life in a very simple, clear and sincere language. You have wonderfully described the innocent joy and emotion that was in the memories of those small days starting from primary school. Playing in the school field, chatting on the veranda, sharing tiffin, these parts remind us of our school life memories.

You have described the experience of the first day very beautifully. On the one hand, fear, on the other hand, curiosity and attraction to toys, these are very real reflections of the child's mind. The teacher's affectionate behavior and the fact that she explained the importance of education along with sports have made the writing more meaningful.

You have presented your feelings as a student through happiness and struggle. Trying during exams, working hard for good results, these things portray the real picture of school life. The way you have written about Ma'am, you can beautifully understand how a teacher's inspiration and discipline play a role in shaping character.

I found the story of being away from school after an illness and then returning to your own responsibilities very inspiring.

The story of how the values ​​of school life have shaped you into the person you are today through the teaching of confidence, patience, and responsibility is truly amazing.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.7
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.2 Points