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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem16 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

While reading the article, I clearly understood that you have tried to convey your school life memories very sincerely. Your childhood story centered on primary school reminded us of a child going to school, which is heartwarming. Especially the incident of losing a pen, although small, beautifully portrays the fear, innocence and depth of memory in a child's mind.

The feelings of your father being a teacher and growing up in that environment have come across well. On the one hand, love, on the other hand, fear, this conflict emerges from the challenge of school life.

Learning the values ​​of life from the discipline and advice given by your father is truly inspiring to me. Similarly, by mentioning the English teacher, you have beautifully expressed how deep the influence of a teacher can be. Overall, the post was great.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.9
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.9
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1.7
Total9.5 Points
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