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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem18 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

While reading your article, one can clearly feel the emotions of the end of school life, especially the pain and memories of the farewell day. The feelings that you have expressed in the description of the farewell ceremony, the tears, the last moments with friends, the blessings of sirs and madams, are all worth remembering. The farewell day really brings out emotions.

Your description of your feelings as a student was very natural. Even though everyone is smiling, this dual feeling of pain hidden inside is beautifully expressed. The effort to maintain relationships with friends and the respect for your beloved teacher shows how passionate you are towards them. I especially liked the part about your interest in mathematics and the teacher's inspiration.

The fear of participating in competitions, failure and the realization of building confidence from there clearly highlight the mental development of a student. Here, your life view and interest in learning are worthy of praise.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.6
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.1 Points