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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem17 days ago

You have beautifully portrayed your school memories. Thank you for sharing the moments of spending time in a hotel with your friends from your last class, having meals together.

The way you have described your feelings as a student is truly inspiring. You have beautifully portrayed how the presence of good teachers builds a student's confidence. Especially the gratitude towards your beloved teacher and principal and the experience of being a senior prefect show the great side of your school character. The part about getting back that responsibility with the support of your classmates and teachers despite being ill is very inspiring.

I found your experiences around the teacher wonderful. The lesson of learning discipline and leadership through his strictness and discipline is truly inspiring. The process of your character building is clearly evident here.

The story of becoming courageous from lack of confidence carries an important life lesson. There are many positive aspects of your school life that I like.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.7
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1.7
Total8.9 Points