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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem17 days ago

The mischief of school life, friendship, sense of freedom and balance of studies have been presented very beautifully. Especially the dual aspect of the tom boy nature, skipping school and the identity of a responsible student in the midst of it all shows that you were responsible.

The incident of the teacher's compassion and motherly behavior makes us understand how important the role of teachers is in school life. The moment of caring for a teacher with milk and biscuits when he was sick is a moment of love, it is instructive from this incident how beautifully a teacher can behave.

I really liked the author's perspective. The realization of the need for encouragement and confidence instead of sympathy is very valuable for real life. Such realization is truly commendable.

The strange things in school life develop our determination, confidence and mindset of change, and he has presented those issues brilliantly.

If you had added captions to the images and used markdown, you could have gotten a better mark.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.5
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9 Points