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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia del pequeño yo: Mis días de escuela

in Story On Steem16 days ago (edited)

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Along with joy, the difficult reality of life can be understood wonderfully from our school life, which you have beautifully portrayed. The experience of changing schools due to family changes in childhood has made us understand that school life is also quite challenging.

The beauty of our school life is revealed through these writings, such as old schools, beloved teachers and a safe environment. The part describing the first teacher as a second mother is a very emotional one and you have been able to beautifully express how deep an impact a teacher can have on a life.

The struggle to adapt to a new school, loneliness and later gradually making friends and joining rhythmic gymnastics show that you can adapt well to any environment. We can also understand how difficult these changes can be for a child from your writing.

You have been able to self-criticize yourself wonderfully. How school life has developed the writer's values, empathy and mentality of taking a stand against injustice has been beautifully expressed through this post.

It would have been better to add photo captions.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing2
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.5 Points