RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days.
Greetings,
Thank you so much for participating in the contest.
I got a nostalgic feeling in your post from the beginning. The experience of being scared on the first day of school, sitting next to your mother in class, helped you become self-confident later.
It is really admirable to present yourself as a silent, quiet but attentive student. Especially the fact that you were hesitant to speak and gradually overcoming that obstacle shows your self-development and mental fortitude. Active participation in scouting, sports and cultural activities along with studies shows that you were gaining quite a bit of skill in various subjects right from school life.
The author's understanding of the importance of teachers and friends is very mature. I liked this philosophy, not just memorization, but learning is the real thing. It shows that you have understood not only memory, but also the deep meaning of education.
The incident of losing a pen and learning honesty from it is wonderful. In my opinion, this incident is a great example of learning values in school life. Moreover, the fact of collecting tiffin money for poor and talented students shows your social responsibility and compassion.
The way you have connected the lessons of school life to today's life - justice, patience, love, and the courage to stand against injustice - is truly admirable. This is a beautiful philosophy of yours.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Original storytelling from childhood | 2 |
| Original Photography | Personal photos or recreated moments, photo caption | 0 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Neat format, readable, visually appealing | 1.8 |
| Memory Description | Emotions, details, and clarity of childhood | 2 |
| Life Lesson / Value | Reflection on what the memory taught you | 2 |
| Total | 7.8 Points |
Thank you so much for feedback.
The way you discussed my post in detail is truly commendable. I wish you all the best.