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RE: SC-S29/W4- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : People Who Shaped My Childhood |
Greetings,
Thank you so much for participating in the contest.
Through this post, you have deeply expressed the impact of your mother's extraordinary sacrifice, struggle and love in shaping your childhood.
The absence of your father, the death of your brother and the reality of poverty have made me understand that it was a difficult struggle for you. You have clearly highlighted the role of family and environment in the memoir section.
The values of honesty, hard work and sense of responsibility are reflected in the description of guidance and education. You have beautifully presented the continuity of that education in the present life.
The writing would have been better if you had used markdown.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Fully original and human-written content | 2 |
| Photography | Original or meaningful recreated images + caption | 1.8 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Clean, structured, and visually appealing | 1.5 |
| Memory Description | Emotional depth and clarity of storytelling | 2 |
| Life Lesson / Impact | How the person shaped your values or character | 2 |
| Total | 9.3 Points |