Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You have beautifully expressed your deep love, gratitude, and dependence on your mother, which felt truly touching to me.

In your writing, your mother’s presence in every important moment of your childhood, her support during illness, and the values she taught you are clearly highlighted.

You also explained nicely how these lessons are influencing your present life. However, In my opinion, the first point could be written a little shorter. The other points would be better if they were arranged in clear paragraphs and explained with a bit more detail.