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RE: SC-S29/W4- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : People Who Shaped My Childhood

in Story On Steem6 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

As the person who influenced your childhood the most, You have beautifully portrayed your grandfather's influence. You have written that his teachings, affection and memories have played a profound role in shaping your childhood.

The incident of going to the doctor as the most memorable memory is instructive. We should all adopt the lessons of your grandfather's patience and good behavior.

You have shown how your grandfather combined love and discipline to explain right and wrong. I believe this has had a positive impact on your character building. You have beautifully presented important values ​​like religious education, respect for elders and good behavior, which is commendable.

You have very well reflected the teachings of your grandfather in solving the problems of today's life. This has made your post more inspiring to me.

However, it would have been better if you had added captions to the pictures and written in paragraph form.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeFully original and human-written content2
PhotographyOriginal or meaningful recreated images + caption1.7
Markdown & PresentationClean, structured, and visually appealing1.9
Memory DescriptionEmotional depth and clarity of storytelling2
Life Lesson / ImpactHow the person shaped your values or character2
Total9.6 Points