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RE: SC-S29/W4- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : People Who Shaped My Childhood

in Story On Steem5 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You have beautifully shared the role of your parents in shaping your childhood. From your writing, it is clear how important they were in building your life.

The memory of going to school with your mother is a very sweet and emotional moment that anyone can relate to.

You are absolutely right that parents play the most important role in shaping a person. You explained very nicely how their love and guidance helped build your character and showed you the right path in life.

You also presented the important values of your life in a meaningful way, which made the writing deeper and more thoughtful.

The part where you showed how your parents’ teachings still reflect in your present life is truly inspiring. Your mindset of following their ideals in your own life is really admirable. It would have been better if you had used a caption under the picture.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeFully original and human-written content2
PhotographyOriginal or meaningful recreated images + caption1.7
Markdown & PresentationClean, structured, and visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotional depth and clarity of storytelling2
Life Lesson / ImpactHow the person shaped your values or character2
Total9.5 Points