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RE: SC-S29/W4- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : People Who Shaped My Childhood

in Story On Steem5 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You mentioned that the person who influenced your childhood the most was your father, and you explained how he shaped your early life.

Although he stopped you from following your dream of sports, his goal was to make you a stable and responsible person. Most fathers want their children to grow up as responsible human beings, and your case is not different.

You beautifully described the memories of spending time on the playground with your father, getting a bicycle for going to school, and sometimes receiving punishment. These memories reflect your father’s strict love and teachings.

Even though your father’s discipline was strict, it helped you build a well-structured life. You showed how strictness and love together contribute to strong character building.

After reading your post, it feels that punctuality, honesty, responsibility, patience, and sacrifice were important lessons from your father. Even today, his teachings are clearly reflected in your life. Your hard work, sense of time, responsibility, and honesty have created a strong foundation in both your professional and personal life, which is very inspiring to see.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeFully original and human-written content2
PhotographyOriginal or meaningful recreated images + caption1.9
Markdown & PresentationClean, structured, and visually appealing1.9
Memory DescriptionEmotional depth and clarity of storytelling2
Life Lesson / ImpactHow the person shaped your values or character2
Total9.8 Points
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