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RE: SC-S29/W5 – Nostalgia Of The Little Me: My Favorite Childhood Place
Greetings,
Thank you so much for participating in the contest.
You have beautifully described your favorite childhood place as an unfinished building where you used to play. The memories of secretly playing with friends at midnight and children from different religions and cultures enjoying together feel very nostalgic.
Through these memories, you expressed the values of loving and respecting everyone equally, as well as the true meaning of childhood friendship. However, the writing would be even better if a little more detail was added.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Fully original and human-written content | 2 |
| Photography | Original or meaningful recreated images + caption | 0 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Clean, structured, and visually appealing | 1.5 |
| Memory Description | Emotional depth and clarity of storytelling | 1.8 |
| Life Lesson / Feeling | Emotional or meaningful impact of the place | 1.8 |
| Total | 7.1 Points |