Hi @roohiasif99
Thank you for sharing such a great story about your activities with your family. The story is engaging and well-structured, from preparing breakfast to enjoying dinner. The sequence of activities is quite varied, and some of the photos are also well-taken.

I have a few suggestions: there are some grammatical and spelling errors, so by proofreading, you might be able to improve your sentence structure and avoid repetition to make your writing sound more natural and easier to understand. To make the photos more engaging, consider adding captions so readers can understand them more quickly. I hope these suggestions are helpful. Thank you.
#s34improvement