Hello @shamimalik
Assalam Alaikum, you have tried your best to present yourself in a good way. But there are still some minor flaws that need to be addressed. Download the Grammarly extension in your Chrome so that if any sentence or phrase or any word is wrong, it will correct it. So that your post becomes a quality post. So that people are attracted to you. You have had a great day and the little sparrows look so cute. Have a nice day