Thank you very much for participating in writing your diary. You organized food for the poor on the anniversary of your father's death, which is very commendable. However, some aspects of your diary writing need to be improved. For example, it is better not to use edited pictures in your diary.

There were edited pictures in the diary. Also, you wrote a diary about a topic of the day, so you failed to follow the rules.

The markdown for the text is correct, but it would have been nicer if the images had been marked down.

I didn't find your comment in the diary of the three writers.