Hi, @bossj23

It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:

I imagine it was very difficult to make those decisions, especially when you have your own goals and they don't align with your life circumstances. Balance depends on peace of mind and willpower, both to do things and to sacrifice something for the greater good. Although I would agree with you, perhaps other people wouldn't agree with your conclusions.

I can understand that you were inspired and let your emotions out, since it's a sensitive topic for you. But even so, 1618 words, not counting the headings, is too much; rules are made to be followed. Even so, it was a great story, good job.