Hi @rokonn 👋
Thank you for sharing your interesting story about your daily activities. The story is well-organized, covering everything from exam preparation to resolving an issue with the electric meter. I think your story is informative, especially with the inclusion of several photos that have captions, which help readers understand each activity.

As a small suggestion for improvement, some paragraphs are still too long, and there are repeated words like “anyway” and “after,” as well as some redundancy in your explanation of the electric meter. So, just use more concise sentences, cut down on repetition, and pay attention to grammar so that your writing flows better and is more comfortable to read. That’s all—hope this helps, friend. Thank you.
#s34improvement