Hi @drhira, thank you for participating in the "Week-01: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Personal Diary."

I can see you and kids had a day well spent with your sister inlaw visiting them to spent Eid celebration for the second day together.I can see your kids were so happy and enjoyed every moment at your sister inlaw place .Automatically when are children are we are happy as well.

My observation is that have haven’t followed some of the rules like commenting in three authors post who have participated in the contest. Again, How can you write a diarygame without mentioning the date ,you were supposed to mentioned while writing .This because you might be writing out of the date given in the contest .Pleas try to obey the challenge rules next time .Always read before participating.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 5marks
• Following the rules: 1.3marks
• Markdown Usage: 1 mark
• Comments: 0Mark

Scores| 7.3/10