RE: "SC-S32/W2-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Travel Diary.
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Hello, I can see you had a great day after spending Eid feast .You had to relaxed and have leisure by visiting the embankment in the village and the river with your son and sister inlaw children.I can you people had some great movement there .It was a nice day indeed.
My observation is that you didn’t mentioned about the date of your travel diary .How can you write a diary without date.Also no means of transportation to your travel side eithe car ,bus ,train and even possible give us a snapshot you took throughout the journey .Your travel diary sounds as a normal diary game .We talked of of travel diary meaning How you leave the house , means of transportation, how mange to reach your travel side and places you visited etc
. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Real user | ✔️ |
| #steemexclusive | ✔️ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✔️ |
| AI Article | (Human text!) |
| Bot free | ✔️ |
Comment/Recommendation
- The beauty of diary writing: 4.5marks
- Following the rules: 1marks
- Markdown Usage: 1 mark
- Comments: 1 Mark
Scores| 7.5/10
Thank you for your reviewing. I mentioned at the beginning of the post that I went on a trip on June 2nd. You may not have noticed that. Yes, that's right. I didn't write about transportation issues like cars or other vehicles or travel expenses. I was tired so I didn't remember to mention them.