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RE:  "SC-S32/W2-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Travel Diary.

in Steem For Lifestyle13 days ago

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Hi @sadaf02, thank you for participating in the "Week-02: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Travel Diary."

Reading through your travel diary is worth interesting .I can see you had a beautiful with your cousin visiting the stadium to watch the cricket match Between Pakistan vs Australia .The excitement was really too much and you enjoyed your day in the field .Eventhough ,Australia came out as the winner of the match .What a beautiful day at your end.

My observation is that you did not mentioned the means of transport bus, train , bike etc .How many minutes it took you people to reach stadium. If possible atleast to make your travel journey more interesting take picture in any of your means transport.Explain your journey did you face any challenges on the way not.We are not interested only knowing about the place you travel but your means of transport from the start to the end.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria Remark
Real user ✔️
#steemexclusive✔️
Free of Plagiarism ✔️
AI Article (Human text!)
Bot free ✔️

Comment/Recommendation
  • The beauty of diary writing: 5.3marks
  • Following the rules: 1.7 marks
  • Markdown Usage: 1 mark
  • Comments: 1 Mark

Scores| 9/10