Hi @dove11, thank you for participating in the "Week-02: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Travel Diary."

Reading through your travel diary I can see you and wife had amazing day visiting various places in the mall.You guys shopped in the mall buying buying of things dresses ,vegetables etc.Looking physically the shake you and wife look so tasteful .

My obervation is that you obeyed most of the the instructions but you forgot to comments atleast 3 authors posts .You only engaged on two it’s always good to follow rules.Lastly you didnot applied markdown on your writeup ,you only applied on pictures .Its always good to make your work look good and be inorder .It attract the reader to be more interested to read.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 5.7marks
• Following the rules: 1.8marks
• Markdown Usage: 0.9 mark
• Comments: 0.7 Mark

Scores| 9.1/10