RE: SC-S32/W3-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Health Diary.
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Happy Independence Day in your county✌️and happy public holiday.This a day workers will have enough rest themselves.I can you spend you day mostly at home eating various kinds of food pap with buns as your breakfast and taking enough fruit for health paw paw and watermelon. Sorry for your tooth ache problem .I can imaging how you feel when it start paining .I faced the same problem two years ago , I had sleepless night and was always crying . I took all medication but at the end I visited the hospital and it wa removed .Altleast since then I have been fine .I think 🤔 the best option is to visit the hospital and stop buying drugs from pharmacies because you might still be feeling pains.
My observation, you commented on two authors post why the rules emphasis on three. Your health diary is more of presenting us what you ate and not giving us the health benefits of what you consumed during day, to the human .What about the quantity of food intake do are body need .Do we need to abuse foods we are eating because the body need it .Then body might need food but taking excesss might cause harm. Giving health tips on what we need to eat and avoid is worth important from your experience.
. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Real user | ✔️ |
| #steemexclusive | ✔️ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✔️ |
| AI Article | (Human text!) |
| Bot free | ✔️ |
Comment/Recommendation
- The beauty of diary writing: 4.3marks
- Following the rules: 1.7marks
- Markdown Usage: 1 mark
- Comments: 0.7Mark
Scores| 7.7/10