#club5050💗 SteemPhotos - Contest #3 | Poetry Contest | "The sun of my days my greatest inspiration".

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"The sun of my days my greatest inspiration".


And so I go, getting up every day to learn billiards, following the path left by my copy, there is nothing more beautiful than seeing you wake up among the clouds, you are always there, the sun that always pains me to guide, that can inspire me and that always makes it go further.

What a beautiful lesson we have left day by day, where you hide in the dark and give way to the stars and the moon to replace your place, but this is just so you can rest and the next day come back with greater intensity regardless of whether there is cloudiness

A few times with the moon you can get together, which makes me believe in love and in eternity, no matter how much time can pass at some point they will be together again, the eclipse is synonymous with falling in love, and under a tender kiss makes us notice.

If humanity followed your example, there would be more people worthy of admiration, some who never allow themselves to be overshadowed, others who are always there to fight, and some who will always be there for coexistence, if we had the ability to love with serenity, not to lie and not judging humanity would be different from what is our reality today.

To you that I see every day, to you that I thank every day, because more than a star you are my true teacher, even on rainy days I keep your memory, that you will not always be there but in my memory you must endure.

With this beautiful story I want to remind you that no matter how difficult it may seem, we can overcome everything, it only depends on attitude and kindness, the rain only teaches us that later comes the rainbow, the moon and the stars that there is always room for you to dazzle and the sun is only the result of something that can never end, a truth that cannot be forgotten, and a memory that will be forever.


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~Until next time.!~

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 2 years ago 

Hello @vanessa-04,

Tou had a great poem my dear but it would be better that each stanza is emphasized. But the rest is good. Great job!

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Thank you very much for the suggestion I will be attentive.

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 2 years ago 

You are right. No matter how many obstacles there are, with effort and commitment we can overcome anything. We must always keep our kindness as the sun always shines. Thanks for participate this contest ❤

Thank you very much for visiting my publication, and that's right, a positive attitude is always necessary!

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