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RE: SLC-S21W1 | Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid.
Student Name: @sana-khan01
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [4/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a detailed account of encountering emergencies, one involving ischemia and you managed that situation. Described thoughtful actions, such as keeping the patient calm, monitoring vital signs, and acting as a first responder for bleeding control. | In the account of ischemia, adding more specific details about recognizing symptoms, such as signs of ischemic pain or discomfort, would enhance clarity. Ischemia literally means loss of blood supply to any part of the body; it does not specify any organ. For the heart, we have to say it's myocardial infarction, known as a heart attack. Also, you didn’t specify what you meant by a comfortable position. How did you monitor the casualty's pulse and breathing? We have to be clear when explaining any event. | [Grade: 0.5] |
| Question 2 | You mentioned calling emergency services. | You didn’t specify any of the steps of the DRABC protocol, nor did you follow the sequence. You have a very poor understanding of the protocol. You didn’t mention anything about the danger, response, airway, or how you would assess breathing. Checking circulation was the last part. When doing any work, we should have a clear understanding, whether it’s any field, but in medical situations, we have to be more precise when executing this in real life. I advise you to reread my lesson so you can have a better understanding of first aid and the DRABC protocol. | [Grade: 0.5] |
| Question 3 | You made an attempt. | You could have made a proper illustration explaining each of the steps of DRABC in detail, better visualizing each part. | [Grade: 0.5] |
| Question 4 | Provided a list of emergency services with clear, well-organized information. | You should have included some very important other emergency numbers, like Fire Emergency, Women’s Helpline services, and others. Consider adding specific descriptions of each emergency number’s purpose. For instance, mentioning mental health helplines or fire services would make the list more comprehensive. This can help users understand when to call each service. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | Completed the assignment with an engaging conclusion. | 6/10 of the questions were correct. I advise you sincerely to read the lesson again and have a better understanding before we move on to lesson 2. | [Grade: 1.5] |
General Feedback: Your performance on this assignment was quite poor. It’s clear that the understanding of the DRABC protocol and the correct procedures for responding to emergencies needs significant improvement. When learning first aid, it is essential to be precise and follow the sequence accurately to ensure the best possible outcome. I strongly recommend thoroughly reviewing the material again to build a more solid foundation in these essential skills.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03