Oh my God! So sorry for your brother, but I believe all is working for your good. What is your bros name again?
The Lord is touching him even as i write this comment.

Your write-up is wonderful but something is gonna make it look even more beautiful.
That you first shorten your sentences, and then include punctuation marks.
While reading your post i almost lost my breathe coz i follow punctuation just like any other reader.
Thanks for understanding and God bless you