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RE: CREATIVE WRITING : TGA -EPISODE 4 (HOLOCAUST)

in Steem Cameroon3 years ago

Beautiful poem, i love it. Just one little thing laking on the poem, where it is written

Ink ok the spirit, Written to no limit
Till eternity yet I will be pleasing,

I think it's ink of the spirit instead.
If we can all offer ourselves wholly, then i think we all are gonna be okay