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RE: The Diary Game 09/09/2021

in Steem Cameroon4 years ago (edited)

It's great you are helping out your mom at home.

Merde, how did things escalate until your brother is now in the casualty?😰 I pray that he triumphs over whatever is bothering him at such a time. Do take care of him.

I have just a few notes. Please, try to shorten your sentences. Also, try to include as many paragraphs which are double spaced and punctuations to make the writing more beautiful.

Thank you. I hope the hospital is not too uncomfortable.