Cool lyrics shaheerbari! I enjoyed it and I think you get an A for effort. I think it could have rhymed a lil better and there's no guarantee anyone will win anything, but.. I like the positive vibes and feeling and I think you did a really great job for your first time trying to write a song! Well done!
Also in regards to the last part about not having the voice for it, I think we all have the voice if we can find it in ourselves to try! I'm very monotone myself and have struggled with doing vocals and I don't think I'm very good at all, but I believe if I keep working at it that someday maybe I could be and I think anyone could be if they set their mind to it and practice and keep at it!
I'm a firm believer of people being able to learn almost anything they set their minds to and keep trying to improve at. :)
I really liked this part!
Don't just lie and slack down
Have some fun with IFC around
Not only are the challenges amazing
But prizes to be won are also blazing
You get to travel to space in round One
Or you can visit another alien town
Nice job man! That part was dope. :) Maybe in the end we can take bits and pieces from all of the entries and combine them into one song. We'll see how it goes! Cheers!
Thank you so much for the compliment it was an exciting experience tryinh to make rhyming sentences hahaha now I know I can't be a song writer for sure but still this challenge was fun.
You're welcome buddy. Glad to hear it was an exciting experience. :) Though I wouldn't say you couldn't be a song writer! It takes time to develop any skill, I was no where near as good at writing songs when I first started as I am now! It took me quite a while and many hours, I think anyone can do it if they want to. Cheers friend.