Fixed how to introduce yourself

Thanks for the seniors who have corrected my writing. Today I will try to repeat again about introducing myself.
As the saying goes do not know then not dear. In 2018 this is the rise of steemit which is where even in various circles.Steemit is a social networking site and blogging on the data base blockchain Steem. Blockchain Steem generate STEEM and Steem Dollars that can be used by token users to get posts, find and comment on interesting content .
do not forget to post a useful post, can provide motivation, and deserve to vote.
okay thanks for your attention, do not forget to follow me @narita.

greetings to the steemians