Thank you, Azfix! The poem is short because it said all I wanted it to say. Did you find it enough to get across a worthwhile message? I love songs that manage to get their message across with an economy of words. But what you say is true--in today's world, it's also good to take the readers' time into consideration. And talking about time, I'm going to have to make some in order to stay "with it" on Steemit!