Your photography is spectacular! I am glad I just finished eating before viewing your post. As it is my thoughts continue to drift towards something sweet!
I look forward to reading more about Kashmir and it's history. What you have shown through your photographs it looks to be a very beautiful area.
As to your writing...it is excellent in my opinion! No need to worry. Actually your writing flowed quite smoothly.
Steemit has many wonderful people to meet and get to know. I think one of the things I like most about interacting with others from all over the world, and so many different cultures, is that we get to know each other without the biased opinions of governments. We are all very much the same, yet different in so many ways. We are all journeying through this life and through steemit we can do it with people we may never have met. It is wonderful!