Boarding House (Spiritual Awakenings- Supernatural Writing Contest (SWC)

in #jerrybanfield6 years ago (edited)

Good day Steemians.
This is my entry into the Supernatural Writing Contest that @jerrybanfield has started..
This is my first story that I will share.
The scariest day of my life
This story happened last summer 2013.

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I am 3rd year college at a private school in General Santos City when it happened, so next year I graduated so I must complete all subjects, requirements, units, etc. So i became SA (student assisstant) in my 1st year college so not of my all subjects / units I got, in shot im iregular student.and to graduate I need to have a class to complete all the units, the problem is, there is no summer classes in our school so I have no choice but to go to another town to take summer classes with my bestfriends ireg also. So, we have decided to find a boarding house, we bring a pan, a pots, a stove and something else, it was our first time because most of us are away from the family.

When we arrived at the boarding house where we were going all summer, the reaction was mixed, for others it was okay to be crisp and near school, others were scary and something else. Take note, we are in different religion of my friends, muslim, Iglesia Ni Cristo and most of all are Catholics. We were six together at the boarding house, I, jena, arkie, rachel, lyn and our muse who don-don a.k.a dawn.

As we entered the boarding house gate, we met so many dogs and cats, the creepy but we ignored it. the name of our landlady is tita nhetz, She is a lesbian and her alone are living and governing her vast home and boarding house. When we entered the house, we met the immense living room, the right room with two rooms, and the bedroom, and the stock room with the back of the living room was the kitchen with a huge, old glass, followed by a huge cr which bites and denies a huge and dark black dog sleeping aside. On the left side of the living room is a stairway to the 2nd floor where the room where we will lodge, at the foot of the stairs before climbing a wheelchair of the old Mom of the tita nhetz, our climb up the stairs welcomed us "GOOD LUCK" note and before we finally climbed up my plywood blocking the stairs, it was just as it did to keep the cats and dogs in the night. All in all, weird and creepy but we're ignored because tita nhetz is kind.

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The first night we were okay, others did not fall asleep because they were in bed. The next day we cooked our lunch outside the house, it was not like cooking in the kitchen, we did not sleep because we did not want to cook there because everytime we saw or passed the mirror there we were there beside us or there was a following So, we're okay to cook out, the problem everytime we cook is that we are also tita nhetz to cook the food of her dogs and cats. It's so bad, too much of a snack of lung nhetz's pets, a smell that's overwhelmed, and believe me or not we've seen a snake inside the yard of that house.

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One afternoon after our class we went straight to the boarding house and talked to our other roommate on the other bedroom ate dimple, in the middle of the story she dumped us if our bedroom lights were sleeping when we were sleeping, yes our answer Because we did not sleep, the light did not kill, 'why te dimple?' jena said, 'it's just because you just put the light on it when you're sleeping, next time you open the light with the rent 'answer my ate dimple,' I do not know why, 'I'm okay, you have to train yourself, you're right,' he said, 'why not?' said the archie, all of us It's a nacurious that it's too complicated to say that, 'because last night while I was listening I heard a climb up the stairs, when it first looked like it was on the 2nd floor and it stopped at the opposite of your room, I thought one of you, but not he knocked on the door You do not even talk after a few minutes to walk down the stairs, I just wondered if the little plywood door did not sound like that, but the noise that we did when we opened it could not pass that plywood when it went up or down the ladder 'story of ate dimple,' maybe winjoy and we just recognized the mother of tita nhetz haha ​​'said lyn and laugh,' that's just what I heard last night, i think it was tita net`z was checking us if we are okey 'ate dimple said,' change topic ' said rachel's , rachel is fearful so she does not like that story

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One afternoon I'm watching tv in the living room, that time is raining and sleeping, it's time for me to see the arkie and the dawn, and because I'm really sleepy when it's time to fall asleep, I woke up holding me Dawn's feet, I'm sure he's dawn because he's sitting at my feet and besides he's just a handsome cold hand for sweat. When I saw the eye I saw a floating or hanging in front of me, blurred just because I was just awake but the eyes widened to see that an aggressive woman was floating in front of me, I cried but no voice came out of my mouth and I can not move, 'vae! He's still awake! 'Archie awake,' you're just dreaming of haha! 'The dawn revealed,' shit bhe mocked me, there's a hanged himself girl standing in front of me 'I told them,' That's because you're asleep, you can not sleep anymore tonight 'said Arkie,' it's really so true, this the place that the girl was hanging .. 'I looked up and i was cold when I saw the rope just like I saw the woman watching in my dream, they also saw dawn and arkie the rope, 'oh my God bhe! Come on up! "Archie said and went straight to the stairs and left the tv open.

We decided not to talk about the three things that happened because one cowardly, the one who did not believe it and the other did not care, but since then we did not even look at the living room and when we were bathing we were together by arkie, we were the same girl so it was okay until one night we all woke up jena, it was as though we were knocking so lyn opened the door but nobody was out, lyn's would kill the light but jena asked to let the light go on, all. Until one thursday they play dawn, jena, rachel and lyn of scrable inside the room and we're arguing with them, lie down on the floor of the room, lie down and lie down on the bed, staring at me, "I told you Arkie and he followed me, 'oh my God bhe what is it??' afraid of arcie, 'are you seeing that? For her footprints, 'I answered,' leave foot on you! 'Archie replies, so they all look at it. She's walking on a human foot as if walking on the opposite, but she says it's been a long time, . That night we woke up with a loud knock on the door of the room, 'who is it?' But she did not answer and opened the door to the light of the room suddenly opened the door very loudly, we all cried out for a wake up nhetz, go to the room and scold us, we'll have to say that but we're so disappointed that she shout us and we all get silent.

The next day we learned about a salesperson near the boarding house of a politician family they were nhetz, the daddy's daddy nhetz was killed in the ambush with their youngest brother, the sister of the tita nhetz eldest son and followed her committed suicide in the house where we were staying, the woman hanged in the living room because of love and the man shot himself for the loss of the election, his mother died in the bedroom where we were staying, did not know if they died or were killed, they were just two tita nhetz and their sister in the canada that lived, and according to the neighbors they are join in the cult(demonic church). On the night we know all the story of that boarding house i asked them to leave our boarding house because we did not want to sleep there tonight. Then rachel too much cry when we tell everything about the house, And because we knew we had decided to leave the boarding house the next day, we also agreed that we had moved on because of what he knew and because he believed it too. Then tita nhetz was upset of us because we left immediately, but no, it was so frightening that our boarding house had brought us.

End of the story

sorry for the wrong grammar
i used google translator to translate it because im not good in english

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