I thought at the end of the story you will tell what happened to this upstart màtre d'. We will see how the children and the London's rats (even if the place of the story is not London, rats will still be from London, it adds sophistication) rob and raped the mutilated corpse of this wretched man, after you have taught him boom-manners.

However, your innuendo in this story about his fate causes more fear and anxiety! Bravo!