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RE: Does outlook equal outcome?

in #life8 years ago

If you don't put a ? after a question, it indicates you mean them rhetorically, and I don't think that's the intent, they seem proper and dead-serious questions in a pretty good post. It might be more impactful to separate them from the rest of the body, also.

I grew up being told to “deal with it” or “man up” and through those moments I learned that I could survive the tough times and come out stronger on the other side,-
But what if I was doing it wrong?
What if creating a more understanding self outlook would have allowed for a quicker recovery.?What if accepting my shortcomings and learning how to work around them instead of pushing through them I would have become a better problem solver?

Then your next sentence as a new paragraph.
What do you think?

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The visual aspect of your post can be altered VERY much just with the presentation of your words.

I think you are absolutely correct. It was my oversight that missed the question marks and I really like your suggestion on starting a new paragraph. This was my first post on steemit, is there a way for me to edit the post?

It was as easy as using the edit button....

Sorry, I just noticed this-
There's an "edit" button on the post next to "Reply"
Congratulations on your first post, and even though I was pointing out a mistake or oversight, I'm glad it didn't turn you off but made you think (in a positive way). Keep Steemin'!

I see I'm your first follower. Steemit's really deep, don't be skeert...
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