Please, Will You Help My Girlfriend? :)

My dear Steemians, my girlfriend is doing her final exams this year, and we want to ask for your help with her English exam. They have many themes what to talk about, so she will allways write some sheet about it. And if you will be so kind to leave some comment what is wrong or what to improve.

As you se, I have my problem with english, thats why I am asking for help here :)

Thanks for support.