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RE: Marvelous Tales Contest #9 - Adrift
This reads so well! Your writing is transparent and the story shines through - something I've been trying to get better at in the fiction workshop. :)
This reads so well! Your writing is transparent and the story shines through - something I've been trying to get better at in the fiction workshop. :)
Thank you! I'm trying to work on simplicity and a more casual voice, but it's haaaaard haha. Your entry was a good reminder that you can also celebrate a grandiose vocabulary and integrate it into the story.
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Very smooth read indeed. I agree, the dialogue and setting develop quite naturally.
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