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RE: First condensation

in #microwrite03last year

Task 2:

Task 2: 1,79/2 pts

The telegram is understood in the context of the entire publication and in the reflections. But looking for it to work independently as a micro-story, as a complete story in itself. I think that a title was missing, or using the Sender and the Recipient as a way of contextualizing the story.
As part of a serial story, you once again give a spectacular turn by putting us in another perspective of the revenge of the character from task 1, congratulations.

The reflections, much more related to this task.


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