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RE: Closed Space (Original Song) + Lyrics + A video which I record it today !

in #music7 years ago (edited)

It was good. But short. The only word I stumbled on was society. If the word was said faster at 0:21

That was during the first play. Then I played it again while I was writing this comment to get the timeline, and it sounded better the second time around.

So if that's the only weirdness that stuck out at me, the rest of it was A+ including the 0:21 mark too now that I've heard it twice.

So a job well done. You have talent!

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Thank you so much Intelliguy , you are right , I did a delay on it , but in singing sometimes I do these pauses and sometimes singing fast , even in my own native language , a little delay for the slow tempo to fit on the drums, I am really glad that you enjoyed listening to it , and thanks for A+ , really appreciate for your kindness. :)