Metal song tell me what you think

Hey so i was writing this song and i needed feedback please tell me what you think

      Found and yet forgotten

Im here no legend no past just judgement and hate everyone left me thought i was a disgrace to my kind but was it myself was it them i cant believe my life has gone to this i just want to go. Found and yet forgotten why has it come to this Found and yet forgotten why have you left me to my defeat found yet forgotten dont leave me with my mind. Im here sitting in my pool of depression why has he done this to me i used to be loved it seemed like life was perfect then he turned found yet forgotten why has it gone to this found yet forgotten my mind is my enemy found yet forgotten im all alone. In his eyes im a mistake in her eyes im a pool of flaws and imperfections found yet forgotten
Im just trying to be im just trying to be your perfect image