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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; Perseus-Pisces (Part Five Chapter One)

in #mythpunk8 years ago

"As the guard dropped down the 60 cm broad black M-brane fold entry sphere that Wietse had situated at the guard's feet, the black sphere flickered for a second."

Do not abbreviate centimeter in writing you should generally use the spoken word.

Replace situated with planted, since you already use situated a bit later.

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