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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; Perseus-Pisces (Part Five Chapter One)

in #mythpunk8 years ago

"The research center was situated close to the shoreline and dropping people into the sea, sixty, seventy meters from the shore was a decent way to asure he could work without much interuptions."

I'd change this and avoid unnecessary comma's and extra's:

over 60 meters from shore

Much interuptions, would be many interruptions. But I'd change it to:

without being interrupted

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